The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males.
Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
Paragraph 1:
- Today, many companies are making their effort to hire men and women in the similar or same number of employees.
- In my view, while I accept that there are a lot of benefits of doing this, I think that the problems of gender equality are still not solved by the way that ensures the equality in quantity.
Paragraph 2: positive
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Paragraph 3: negative
- Glass ceiling
Paragraph 4:
- Paraphrasing my view
- Today, many companies are making their effort to hire men and women in the similar or same number of employees.
- In my view, while I accept that there are a lot of benefits of doing this, I think that the problems of gender equality are still not solved by the way that ensures the equality in quantity.
Paragraph 2: positive
-
Paragraph 3: negative
- Glass ceiling
Paragraph 4:
- Paraphrasing my view
